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Churchill depicted a sharp contrast landscape by using seven “I see” at the beginning of his speech on Hitler's invasion of the U.S.R.R. A peaceful and harmonious mean of existence was expressed by the former three “I see”, which can invoke people's compassion to the Russian people. The later four “i see” mainly told the Nazi's cruelty and ferocious aggression, which can enlarge people' s dislike of the Nazis.
And then Churchill showed his standpoint and determination. He had but one aim and one single irrevocable purpose to eliminate Hitler and every vestige of the Nazi regime. And he would never be negotiate with Hitler. What's more, he promised that he would do whatever help he can to Russia and the Russian people.
Next he deeply analyzed the nature of war. “This is no class war, but a war in which the the whole British Empire and Commonwealth of Nations is engaged, without distinction of race, creed, or party.” What he said gived a clear and direct understanding and showed his determination again.
After analysing the nature of the battle, Churchill turned spear to Hitler. He unveiled Hitler's the deepest motive that was subjugation of the Western Hemisphere to his will and to his system. The invasion of Russian was no more than a prelude to an attempted invasion of the British Isles.
In the end, Churchill emphasized the importance and necessary to fight the Nazi German in a joint effort. He called for we should fight in a united way, and only in this way, we can save ourselves form the Nazi German.
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中国明朝
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Ming dynasty governed China for 276 years, and it is described as one of the greatest ordered and stable time in people's history. In that era, the development of manufacture boosted the market economic and urbanization. Multiple of commodities including wine and silk sold in market. Meanwhile China imported many exotic goods, such as time clock and tabacco. Some big business center like Beijing, Najing, Yanzhou and Suzhou appeared one by one. It also occurred in Ming dynasty that the fleet were leaded by Zhenghe took seven large scale expenditures to The Indian Ocean. It is deserved to mention that three classical masterpieces of "Four Classic" in China lecture were created in Ming dynasty.
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a short essay about invention
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As the people's demands springing up, the invention is playing more and more important role. It already has sprawled all aspects in people 's life. All of thing need to be invented to adjust society that move so fast.
Invention is indisensible in our studying. In this area, they are mostly software inve ntion that can help us to revise some knowlvedge,to espand our mind ,to board our hoizantal . And they ase also improve our education and learning equipment that make our learn more effective and detailed. Invention, additionally, created a far-reaching influence in environment. As we all know, the environment now is facing a critical time, so in bid to resave the earth lots of inventions were applied to protecting environment and made significant progress.
It is necessary to take measures to encourage invention.Government support is a controvertible approach to intrigue invention.The other essential way is we need to pay more attention to educate children's innovation spirits instead of only focusing on books, theory and digits.
In conclusion, we nee to do better to accelerate the development and prosperity of invention and its original benefit all return to us.
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