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Hi, Everyone! Please correct my essay 4. Thank you!!!
Nowadays more and more people concerned about health. They go to gum, do fitness, yoga, swimming, and other healthy things. We live in the time too much machine, manufacture, and pollution environment. So it's very important to care about health. It's important to eat good food, do exercise and go to a doctor for doing tests and preventing disease.
People should have more rest and don't nervous. They are said every day walking on air to promote improving health.
As for me, I like sports! I'm sporting girl))) I am doing stretching, yoga, love walking on the forest and cycling in summer. In winter my absolute love is snowboarding. I was in mounting is call Yralskie mountains. I also want to try surfing, it's my dream.
Thanks that you read my notice :) Good day!
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Please correct my essay 3
I live in a block of flats. That flat is private property. A house built in a new modern area. The house is isolated from the main road and located near to the forest. So it doesn't noisy and messy. The flat is small but smart. It calls a studio-apartment. There are the kitchen, workplace, and bed in one place. These parts are separated design. The apartment has two large windows so there is enough light before lunch. I like my apartment now but my perfect place for lives is a small house which located in suburbs. I'd like to breath fresh air and walking to nature. If I need to work or shopping I would go to the city by car quickly. My perfect house has modern furniture, a swimming pool, and a small gym. It has a convenient design. It is cozy and bright.
23 января 2019 г.
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Please correct my essay.
Hello. My name is Dasha. I going to move to the US. And first that I should do when I will come there find a work. My skills might are enough for looking for a good job because I like to meet new people. But I don't know the English language well. So I found out about a job housekeeper which doesn't require special skills and allow me learning English. The work implies cleaning rooms by the vacuum cleaner, washing bathroom and a lot of other things. It is hard work because you have to work with chemical things and bring big weigh. It scares me because from such work may arise a health problem. Perhaps do you know another work for the start in learning the language?
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Today I with my husband and his relatives went to Samara. Alexey's parents gave him tickets to the theatre as a present for the New Year. All day from 10 AM to 10 PM we spent on a journey. At first, we watched the comedy in the theatre about six men that lose their jobs and decide to create a striptease show for getting money. It was an absolutely hilarious story. Even Alexey was laughing although he doesn’t like such things. After the theatre, we went to eat but the cafe where we wanted to eat had been closed. We had to find another place for eating. While we were going to a restaurant we got cold.
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