Is this sentence correct? "Each week I ride my scooter to take my mom to a nearby monastery." How to make it better?

Could anyone help correct the two sentences? "The recognition this book has received is far beyond what it deserves." " The literary status of this book is much higher than it should have earned." Is there any better way to say it? Thanks!

Hi, I've two questions about the word : Bacana. (1) Is it correct to use 'bacana' like this? "Do you want to have massage?" "Yes, I love it." "Bacana! Let's book some sessions!" (2) Is it correct to use 'bacana' like this? One person is eating a cake and says, "The cake costed only 1 dollar." "Bacana!" the other person replied. Obrigado!

Hi, is this sentence correct? If not, how to write it better? "Though I wasn't attracted to fashion, I appreciated a good taste built on a relatively low budget." Something seems unnatural, but I don't know what it is. Could anyone help me?

Is this sentence correct? " Well-groomed he was, that he didn’t buy expensive clothes and famous brands was my gut feeling." I meant to say that although the man was well-dressed, my gut feeling told me that he didn't spend money on expensive clothes and famous brands. I wanted to write it in a more stylish way. Does the sentence sound natural?

Hi, could anyone help me with this sentence? "She never went to the living room and kitchen, despite still using the shared bathroom, the only proof of her existence." Does "the only proof of her existence" sound natural? If not, how to rewrite it?

Hi, I wrote a bad sentence, but didn't know how to improve it. Could anyone help me? "I shook my head while looking at their faces, from one to the other." There were two people sitting opposite me talking. I heard what they said and didn't agree with it, so I shook my head. At the same time, I looked at one guy first, then turned to look at the other guy. How to describe it in a better way?

Is this sentence correct? If not, how to make it better? "I heard Rosa walking toward the front door and left with a dull thud." I want to say that when she left the apartment, she closed the front door, so there was a dull thud.

Could anyone tell me what "as impossible to say no as Andy" means in this sentence? "Nick knows that he can't let anyone into his life. He just never counted on meeting someone as impossible to say no to as Andy." Does it mean that Nick can't say no to Andy?