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Please help me correct this, thanks! Written Exercise 17- Ding Ding has a new family! A few weeks ago, a old woman, a neighbor's mother -in -law took Ding Ding to her home for guarding her kitchen. Actually, The old woman's daughter-in-law has cats. We asked the old woman why she did not take her daughter -in -law'cat to home. The old woman answered: "Do you think cats having meals with mice can guard my kitchen well? " We said nothing but laughed. I hope Ding Ding have a happy life ever with her new owner and I hope Ding Ding is working hard and will never be fired. Ding Ding (丁丁)有一个新家了! 几周前,一位老妇人(老奶奶)- 是一个邻居的婆婆,把Ding Ding 带回家守护她的厨房。 实际上(事实上),这位老妇人(老奶奶)的媳妇有几只猫的。我们问过这(位)老妇人没什么不去把媳妇的猫带回家。 这(位)老妇人回答:“你认为那些和老鼠一起吃饭的猫能守护好我的厨房吗?” 我们没有说什么只有大笑。 我希望Ding Ding 和她的新主人永远有一个快乐人生,我希望Ding Ding 工作努力永远不会被解雇。
16 Ara 2020 15:42
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Please help me correct this, thanks! Written Exercise 17- Ding Ding has a new family! A few weeks ago, an old woman, a neighbor's mother-in-law, took Ding Ding to her home to guard her kitchen. Actually, the old woman's daughter-in-law has cats. We asked the old woman why she did not take her daughter-in-law’s cat home. The old woman answered, “Do you think cats that have meals/eat with mice can guard my kitchen well?" We said nothing but laughed (Makes sense and is perhaps acceptable but I don’t think it’s quite correct. In my opinion, whatever follows “nothing but” should be able to follow “we said”. Maybe I’m wrong, I’m no expert. I’d say, “We just laughed” or “We only laughed.”). I hope Ding Ding will (forever) have a happy life (forever) (unnecessary IMO but this is how you’d say it) with her new owner, and I hope Ding Ding is working hard and will never be fired. Ding Ding (丁丁)有一个新家了! 几周前,一位老妇人(老奶奶)- 是一个邻居的婆婆,把Ding Ding 带回家守护她的厨房。 实际上(事实上),这位老妇人(老奶奶)的媳妇有几只猫的。我们问过这(位)老妇人没什么不去把媳妇的猫带回家。 这(位)老妇人回答:“你认为那些和老鼠一起吃饭的猫能守护好我的厨房吗?” 我们没有说什么只有大笑。 我希望Ding Ding 和她的新主人永远有一个快乐人生,我希望Ding Ding 工作努力永远不会被解雇。he
I think in general we wouldn’t say “old woman” - to me it sounds a bit like someone you’d encounter in a fairy tale. I’d say “an older lady.” People don’t like being called old here. Also, in general you’d put a comma before a quote. There are certain times that doesn’t happen, but for now take that as your rule. Nice job and very cute!
20 Aralık 2020
Please help me correct this, thanks! Written Exercise 17- Ding Ding has a new family! A few weeks ago, an old woman who (1) is a neighbor's mother-in-law, took Ding Ding to her home to guard her kitchen. Actually, the old woman's daughter-in-law has cats. We asked the old woman why she did not take her daughter-in-law’s cats home as well. The old woman answered: "Do you think cats eating mice can guard my kitchen well? " We said nothing but laughed. I hope Ding Ding will have a happy life forever with her new owner and I hope Ding Ding is working hard and will never be fired. Ding Ding (丁丁)有一个新家了! 几周前,一位老妇人(老奶奶)- 是一个邻居的婆婆,把Ding Ding 带回家守护她的厨房。 实际上(事实上),这位老妇人(老奶奶)的媳妇有几只猫的。我们问过这(位)老妇人没什么不去把媳妇的猫带回家。 这(位)老妇人回答:“你认为那些和老鼠一起吃饭的猫能守护好我的厨房吗?” 我们没有说什么只有大笑。 我希望Ding Ding 和她的新主人永远有一个快乐人生,我希望Ding Ding 工作努力永远不会被解雇。
1. Use “who” here since the neighbor and mother in law is the same person. If you list it out, it seems like they are two different people.
17 Aralık 2020
Please help me correct this; thanks! Written Exercise 17- Ding Ding has a new family! A few weeks ago, an older woman, a neighbour's mother -in -law took Ding Ding to her home for guarding her kitchen. The older woman's daughter-in-law has cats. We asked the older woman why she did not take her daughter -in -law's home. The old woman answered: "Do you think cats having meals with mice can guard my kitchen well? " We said nothing but laughed. I hope Ding-Ding has a happy life with her new owner, and I hope Ding Ding is working hard and will never be fired. Ding-Ding (丁丁)有一个新家了! 几周前,一位老妇人(老奶奶)- 是一个邻居的婆婆,把Ding Ding 带回家守护她的厨房。 实际上(事实上),这位老妇人(老奶奶)的媳妇有几只猫的。我们问过这(位)老妇人没什么不去把媳妇的猫带回家。 这(位)老妇人回答: “你认为那些和老鼠一起吃饭的猫能守护好我的厨房吗?” 我们没有说什么只有大笑。 我希望Ding Ding 和她的新主人永远有一个快乐人生,我希望Ding Ding 工作努力永远不会被解雇。
16 Aralık 2020
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