Francesca🎀
Yesterday I hangout with my international friends. We visited a museum at the central station and we went to Navigli for dinner. It was fun and I missed them all. Next, we decided to go to Como to celebrate my birthday as I liked the idea have drink on the lake, but during the trip the car broke down and we had to go back by train. It was almost 11.00 pm so we caught the last one, plus, we had to pay a taxi too. The worst part was that I fight with my boyfriend and that he told me he doesn’t trust me anymore.
1 Şub 2023 09:26
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Yesterday I went out with my international friends. We visited a museum at the central station and we went to Navigli for dinner. It was fun as I had missed them all. Next, we decided to go to Como to celebrate my birthday, as I liked the idea of having a drink on the lake, but during the trip the car broke down and we had to go back by train. It was almost 11.00 pm so we caught the last one, and we had to pay for a taxi too. The worst part was that I had a fight with my boyfriend and he told me he doesn’t trust me any more.
Hopefully you’ve patched things up with your boyfriend ; maybe you can arrange another birthday event which works out better.
1 Şubat 2023
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Yesterday I hung out with my international friends. We visited a museum at the central station and we went to Navigli for dinner. It was fun and I missed them all. Next, we decided to go to Como to celebrate my birthday as I liked the idea to have / of having a drink on the lake (if you are having dinner in a boat on the lake then it's correct, otherwise I think it should be "by the lake"), but during the trip the car broke down and we had to go back by train. It was almost 11.00 pm so we caught the last one, plus, we had to pay a taxi too. The worst part was that I fought with my boyfriend and that he told me he didn’t trust me anymore.
Good work. I hope your situation got better.
1 Şubat 2023
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Yesterday I HUNG OUT (past tense and two words as it's a phrasal verb) with my international friends. We visited a museum at the central station and we went to Navigli for dinner. It was fun and I missed them all. Next, we decided to go to Como to celebrate my birthday as I liked the idea TO have drinks/a drink on the lake, but during the trip the car broke down and we had to go back by train. It was almost 11.00 pm so we caught the last one, plus, we had to pay FOR a taxi too. The worst part was that I FOUGHT with my boyfriend and that he told me he doesn’t trust me anymore.
Well done! A nice piece of writing! Your use of the past tense is good and only a couple of times did you get it wrong. If it's a true story, I hope your car is now mended and your boyfriend is being nicer to you :)
1 Şubat 2023
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