Hey! Can some one help me to check this essay?
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Nowadays, flying to enjoy the holidays or to work overseas has become more common and with it, the pollution has also become greater; as humans we are by nature, very egoistic and having the opportunity to fly out of our home country is seen as a luxury and as a way to show off our wealth and position in society, disregarding if we flew with the cheapest flight found online with just one small bag that is included in the low price.
Unfortunately, raising the tax price would not change the fly flow, in my opinion it can be quite the opposite too, since it's going to be more expensive it will be even more yearned to visit a touristic place and exhibit our possibilities to fly ignoring the high prices. Needless to say, this only applies to a small percentage of the population, as not all of the users fly to pamper themselves, but also to work or meeting relatives. A good solution could be maintaining the price flow stable all over the year due to the fact that people could fly all year round instead of waiting for a specific season or for the price drop and also regulating the airplane conditions (like the year it was created since the newer aircraft pollute less) or simply creating bigger aircraft to fit more people and fly less times a day to the same destination because many flight journeys and hence pollution would be saved.
We can agree that taxing will not stop the heavy air traffic and would not be fair for those who fly for labouring or for those with personal emergencies. Governments should tax cheap flight companies for the huge responsibility they have with the environment and also with the passengers, because at last, the responsible of this issue is no more than the ones who own and keep this problem running every day.
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