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It's already fall, the most beautiful seanson in a year. When you think about fall,what comes into your mind first? Is it that a lot of Leaves turn red or yellow, and eventually fall off the trees, or walking on a street in a chilly morning? Both of them don't happen in early fall. I know that many people have been struggling with the hot weather for many months. They look forward to autumn, but as the autumn coming, they find that the temperature raises to a higher level beyond they they have expected. In China, we have a special phrase to describe this weather. We call it " Autumn Tiger". The heat outside just like a tiger which comes in a rush, but exceeds people's expectation. The worse thing is that it give people both physical and mental hurt. The good news is that the "tiger" will also go away in a rush. About 15 days later, the ture fall will come with high bule sky and fresh air.
2024年8月30日 03:34
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It's already fall, the most beautiful seanson in a year. When you think about
fall,what comes into your mind first? Is it that a lot of Leaves turn red or
yellow, and eventually fall off the trees, or walking on a street in a chilly
morning? Both of them don't happen in early fall. I know that many people have
been struggling with the hot weather for many months. They look forward to
autumn, but as the autumn coming, they find that the temperature raises to a
higher level beyond they they have expected. In China, we have a special phrase
to describe this weather. We call it " Autumn Tiger". The heat outside just like
a tiger which comes in a rush, but exceeds people's expectation. The worse thing
is that it give people both physical and mental hurt. The good news is that the
"tiger" will also go away in a rush. About 15 days later, the ture fall will
come with high bule sky and fresh air.
Here is the corrected version of the text:
It's already fall, the most beautiful season of the year. When you think about fall, what comes to your mind first? Is it that a lot of leaves turn red or yellow and eventually fall off the trees, or walking on a street on a chilly morning? Both of these don't happen in early fall. I know that many people have been struggling with the hot weather for many months. They look forward to autumn, but as autumn comes, they find that the temperature rises to a higher level than they expected. In China, we have a special phrase to describe this weather. We call it "Autumn Tiger." The heat outside is just like a tiger which comes in a rush but exceeds people's expectations. The worst thing is that it gives people both physical and mental discomfort. The good news is that the "tiger" will also go away in a rush. About 15 days later, true fall will come with a high blue sky and fresh air.
2024年8月30日
It's already fall, the most beautiful season of the year. When you think about fall, what comes into your mind first? Is it that a lot of leaves turn red or yellow, and eventually fall off of the trees, or is it walking on a street on a chilly morning? Neither of these things happen in early fall. I know that many people have been struggling with the hot weather for many months. They look forward to autumn, but as autumn comes, they find that the temperature rises to a level higher than what they expected. In China, we have a special phrase to describe this weather. We call it " Autumn Tiger". The heat outside is just like a tiger which comes in a rush, but exceeds people's expectation. The worse thing is that it gives people both physical and mental pain. The good news is that the "tiger" also goes away in a rush. About 15 days later, the true fall will come with a blue sky and fresh air.
Many of my changes are just question of style. I hope this is helpful.
2024年8月30日
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