This is a short writing. Can you help me point out any inconsistencies or grammatical mistakes?Thank you!
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We could not see anyone else….
With the desire gradually fading away…
The sun flung its light or rays (because shot is more for guns)….
There was a rainbow (since all the other sentences were in past tense)…un less you want to add it to “” “”
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