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Today, I had a test in my French class. I was really worried, but I think it went well, so I’m relieved. After I got home, I watched a drama that’s currently broadcasting. It’s really interesting, so I hope it keeps going for a long time. Thanks for reading.
2025年6月16日 13:57
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Today, I had a test in my French class. I was really worried, but I think it went well, so I’m relieved. After I got home, I watched a drama that’s currently being broadcast. It’s really interesting, so I hope it continues for a long time. Thanks for reading.
Improved Version (more natural English): Today, I had a test in my French class. I was quite nervous, but I think it went well, so I feel relieved now. When I got home, I watched a drama that’s on TV at the moment. It’s really engaging, so I hope it stays on air for a while. Thanks for reading! Explanation & Tips: 1. “broadcasting” → “being broadcast” We use passive voice for TV/radio shows: is being broadcast. Tip: When something is shown on TV (not the person doing it), use the passive: The show is being broadcast every Sunday. 2. “keeps going” → “continues” “Keeps going” is okay but informal and a bit unclear in this context. “Continues” is clearer. Tip: “Continue” is a good verb when talking about TV shows, courses, or trends. I hope the series continues next season. 3. “I was really worried” → “I was quite nervous” (optional upgrade) “Quite nervous” is a nice B2-level phrase. It sounds a bit more natural in academic or written English. Tip: Learn synonyms for emotions—worried = anxious / nervous—to sound more fluent. 4. “After I got home” → “When I got home” Both are correct, but “when” flows a bit more naturally here. Tip: Use “when” to link events that happened in sequence during the day. 5. “Drama” Be aware: in English, “drama” can also mean “theatre” or “serious events”. Tip: Add clarity with TV drama or name the show: I watched a new crime drama on Netflix.
2025年6月16日 16:26
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