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Maftuna Xalilova
Hello to everyone. My name is Maftuna. My surname is Khalilova . I 'm from Tashkent. Today i am going to talk about hobbies. Everyone has their hobby. Someone likes reading books or playing football. But i don't like that. My hobby is making things. And my business is this too. I make different Jewellery and crafts. And i sell them on my telegram channel. I love making . Because, it is very interesting. If you want learn making crafts or Jewellery send me email , I can teach you🤗
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2021年8月25日 18:59
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Hello to everyone. My name is Maftuna. My surname is Khalilova . I 'm from Tashkent. Today i am going to talk about hobbies. Everyone has their hobby. Someone likes reading books or playing football. But i don't like that. My hobby is making things. And my business is this too. I make different Jewellery and crafts. And i sell them on my telegram channel. I love making . Because, it is very interesting. If you want learn making crafts or Jewellery send me email , I can teach you🤗
Lovely Maftunakhan
Hi Maftuna!!! You did a great job, see Julia's corrections, they are really good I just wanted to add one thing quickly. In general, it is improper grammar to begin a sentence with a preposition in English. The main reason behind using a preposition is to connect two sentences together so it is no longer necessary to separate the phrases. Hope that helps!!
2021年8月25日
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Hello everyone. My name is Maftuna. My surname is Khalilova . I'm from Tashkent. Today I am going to talk about hobbies. Everyone has their hobby. Someone likes reading books or playing football. But I don't like that. My hobby is crafting things. This is my business too. I make different pieces of jewellery and crafts. And I sell them on my telegram channel. I love making them because it is very interesting. If you want to learn to make crafts or pieces of jewellery send me an email, I can teach you🤗
Lovely Maftunakhan
Great job! Your work looks really interesting and creative, I'd like to hear more about it :)
2021年8月25日
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Hello everyone. My name is Maftuna. My surname is Khalilova . I 'm from
Tashkent. Today i am going to talk about hobbies. Everyone has their hobby.
Someone likes reading books or playing football but i don't like that. My hobby
is making things. And my business is about that too. I make different Jewellery and crafts. And i sell them on my telegram channel. I love creating because it is
very interesting. If you want to learn crafting or how to make Jewellery send me an email , I can teach you🤗 Lovely Maftunakhan
You've got a really interesting hobby 😊. I admire crafty people and love to follow them on Instagram.
2021年8月25日
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