‏First, Mohammed bin Salman is the Crown Prince of Saudi Arabia ،Then he starts big projects in the country After that, he makes Vision 2030 for the future, He helps young people to get more jobs، Last he is a famous leader today

Please may you correct my writing

Question

‏First, Mohammed bin Salman is the Crown Prince of Saudi Arabia ،Then he starts big projects in the country After that, he makes Vision 2030 for the future, He helps young people to get more jobs، Last he is a famous leader today

Please may you correct my writing

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Your writing is amazing! With just a few small corrections, your paragraph will look perfect.

Here's a breakdown:

“First, Mohammed bin Salman is the Crown Prince of Saudi Arabia ،Then…”
❌ Wrong punctuation mark (Arabic comma “،”).
✅ Use a period → “…Saudi Arabia. Then…”

“Then he starts big projects in the country”
❌ Verb tense mismatch.
✅ Better: “he started” or “he launched.”

“After that, he makes Vision 2030 for the future,”
❌ Wrong verb choice.
✅ Better: “he introduced Vision 2030 for the future.”

“He helps young people to get more jobs،”
❌ Extra Arabic comma.
✅ Correct: “He helps young people get more jobs.”

“Last he is a famous leader today”
❌ Awkward phrasing.
✅ Better: “Finally, he is a famous leader today.”

✅ Corrected Version
First, Mohammed bin Salman is the Crown Prince of Saudi Arabia. Then he launched big projects in the country. After that, he introduced Vision 2030 for the future. He helps young people get more jobs. Finally, he is a famous leader today.

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