Is this correct? well written?
I dedicate this thesis to my family, friends and professors who during the carrying out of this research gave me a word of support.
Is this correct? well written? I dedicate this thesis to my family, friends and
professors who, during my research, supported and encouraged me.
2024年4月18日
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Is this correct? well written? I dedicate this thesis to my family, friends and
professors who, during the course of this research provided encouragement and
support.
2024年4月17日
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Is this correct? well written? I dedicate this thesis to my family, friends and
professors who during the carrying out of this research gave me a word of
support.
The last part of the sentence is not very idiomatic. I would word it something like "...who supported me during this research", "....who supported me while I carried out this research", or something like "....who offered me words of support while I carried out this research".
Congrats on your thesis!