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I'm planning to take the Eiken 2nd graddd exam next. Could you correct my English? Topic: Today, some customers ask delivery companies to put packages by ther doors instead of receiving them directly. Do you think this kind of survices will become more common in the future? My writing: I think this kind of survice will become common in the future. First of all, it's convinient to receive packages when they aren't at home. Secondly, it makes drivers to reduce works. If customers aren't at home, drivers have to deliver them the other day. This kind of services contribute to reduce works. Therefore, this kind of services will make an advantage of customers and drivers.
2024年3月16日 10:27
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I am planning to take the Eiken 2nd grade exam. Could you correct my English? Topic: Today, some customers asked delivery companies if they could place packages by their doors, instead of receiving them directly. Do you think this kind of service will become more common in the future? I think this kind of service will become common in the future. First, it's convenient for customers to receive packages when they are not at home. Secondly, if the customers are not at home, drivers have to deliver the packages the next day. If drivers could leave the package at the door, this would reduce the drivers' workload. Therefore, this kind of service would have an advantage for both customers and drivers. "Grade" not "graddd". "Asked" not "ask". "Could place" instead of "to put" "Their" not "ther" "Service" not "survice". "Convenient" not "convinient" "First", instead of using "first of all" (this is more of my opinion than factual). In the third sentence, I've changed the sentence structure to reduce the repetitiveness in your writing. "It may reduce the drivers' workload" instead of "it makes drivers reduce work" Good job! Hope this helps! ☺️
2024年3月27日