Joy
Today when I was driving home, I saw a man run a light on the cross road while he was holding a little girl and staring at his phone.
It’s unbelievable how dangerous this is.
I admire his courage…
2024年1月8日 10:03
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Today, when I was driving home, I saw a man run a red light while holding a little girl and staring at his phone. It’s unbelievable how dangerous this is. I admire his courage…
Some courage to admire, for sure! 😆
You wrote this well, Joy, nice job.
My corrections are minor, for clarity & fluency.
I hope it helps!
2024年1月8日
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