Very good job! Your original text was clear and very easy to understand. I made some corrections and added some linking phrases and words to make it sound more natural. Tip = "Comida para llevar" is okay. However, if you were at home and ordered some food, in Spanish we say "pedir un domicilio". Just in case that was what you wanted to express. If not, I hope you find the construction useful for future pieces of writing. :D Overall, well done! Keep up the good work! Chao. Un saludo desde Colombia.