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Alice
I think more you speak another linguage, more opportunities you have in life . I speak portuguese , japanese and english . I have worked for many year in computer Science , so technical English has been important for my career . Besides that, I like to travel, English has been the language I use to be able to be in different countries.
2025年8月17日 19:45
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I think the more you speak another language, the more opportunities you (will) have in life . I speak Portuguese, Japanese and English . I have worked for many years in computer science , so technical English has been important for my career . I like to travel. English has been the language I use to communicate in different countries.
Dear Alice, I think these are ideas on different topics, put together in a single paragraph. In my opinion, the organization of ideas in this paragraph could have been better. Alternatively, you could have written separate paragraph, each revolving around one of the central ideas you have mentioned.
2025年8月20日 15:54
I think the more languages you speak, the more opportunities you have in life. I
speak Portuguese , Japanese and English . I have worked for many year in
computer Science , so technical English has been important for my career .
Besides that, I like to travel, English has been the language I use to be able
to be in different countries.
I’m interested in learning Portuguese, would you like to be my language partner?
2025年8月22日 16:57
I think the more you speak another language, the more opportunities you have in life. I speak Portuguese, Japanese and English . I have worked for many year sin computer science, so technical English has been important for my career. Besides that, I like to travel, and English has been the language I use to be able to communicate in different countries.
2025年8月18日 15:05
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I think the more languages you speak, the more opportunities you can have in life . I speak portuguese , japanese and english . I have worked for many years in computer Science , so technical English has been quite important for my career . Besides that, I like to travel, English has been the language I use to communicate with people in all other countries.
I made a quick correction
2025年8月17日 20:13
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