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Chris Huang
I have found that my daily commute helps me to mentally prepare my workday and wind down after work. The daily commute takes around 2 hours, I can complete many tasks during the commute and I always have a seat on the transportation.
2023年5月28日 23:13
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I have found that my daily commute helps me to mentally prepare for my workday and wind down after work. The daily commute takes around 2 hours. I can complete many tasks during the commute, and I always have a seat on the transportation.
You wrote it very naturally! I think if you try to avoid run-on sentences (sentences with a lot of "and"s) and remember when to put commas in-between independent clauses, you'll be an even better writer!
2023年5月29日
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I have discovered that my daily commute not only helps me mentally prepare for my workday but also allows me to unwind after work. Typically lasting around 2 hours, my commute grants me the opportunity to accomplish various tasks, all while ensuring I have a seat during transportation.
2023年5月28日
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