italki992232
The next trip I am planning to go is Nepal which is in Asia. The reason I love to visit there is my brother from Nepal is getting married next month. Their familes want me come and enjoy not only wedding but also Nepal's cluture. Nepal is a country of less population and located on the mountain areas.
2022年5月2日 03:35
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受邀老师
The next trip I am planning to take is to travel to Nepal, which is in Asia. The reason I love visiting Nepal is that my brother lives there. He is getting married next month. Their family who live there, want me to visit them and to enjoy the wedding and also Nepal's culture. Nepal's population is small as it is located in the mountains.
2022年5月3日
受邀老师
The next trip I am planning to go on is to Nepal which is in Asia. The reason I'd love to visit there is my brother from Nepal is getting married next month. Their families want me to come and enjoy not only the wedding but also Nepal's culture. Nepal is a country with a smaller population and is located in the mountain areas.
Good job. It sounds like a good plan and I hope you have a great time there!!
2022年5月2日
受邀老师
The next trip I am planning to go on is Nepal which is in Asia. The reason I love to visit there is that my brother from Nepal is getting married next month. The bride's family want me to come and enjoy not only the wedding but also Nepal's culture. Nepal is a country with a smaller population and is located in the mountain areas.
Good use of continuous tenses in the first two sentences. You need to be a bit more specific about "their families". I assume you mean the bride's relatives. Note: go on a trip, located in the mountain areas?"
2022年5月2日
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