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Alex Domin
One of my favorite genres is fantasy. It promotes imagination and I feel very good when I live the story intensely. I also read novels and thrillers. There are a book club to share opinions and the passion for books. At the different book fairs the authors present his books and makes book signings. The wait to have the book signed is exhausting, many people usually come but it is very exciting to have the book signed by its author. Personally, the time I really like to read is before bed. Normally it helps me to relax and to fall asleep.
2024年3月5日 16:59
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Here's an edited version: One of my favourite genres is fantasy because it sparks my imagination, allowing me to immerse myself deeply in the story. Additionally, I enjoy reading novels and thrillers. I participate in a book club where we share our opinions and passion for books. Attending book fairs is another highlight for me, where authors present their works and engage in book signings. Though the wait to have a book signed can be exhausting due to the large crowds, the excitement of meeting the author makes it worthwhile. Personally, I find reading before bed particularly enjoyable. It helps me unwind and drift off to sleep peacefully.
2024年3月5日
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One of my favorite genres to read is fantasy. It stimulates the imagination and can be very immersive. I also enjoy reading thrillers. I am part of a book club where we share our opinions and passion for books. I also attend various book fairs, where authors present their books and have book signings. The wait to have the book signed can be exhausting as many people usually come, but it is very exciting to have the book signed by its author. Personally, my favorite time to read is before bed. It helps me to relax and to fall asleep.
Great job! Here are a few notes. (1) "favorite" if you're targeting American English; "favourite" if British English. (2) You mention your favorite genre being fantasy, but then you say you read novels and thrillers. A novel is a not genre, so I removed it. (3) If the book fairs are carried out by the book club, I would edit your writing to clarify that. My edits do not make that assumption.
2024年3月6日
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One of my favorite genres is fantasy. It promotes imagination and I feel very good when I experience the story intensely. I also read novels and thrillers. There are book clubs to share opinions and the passion for books. At the different book fairs the authors present their books and do book signings. The wait to have the book signed is exhausting, many people usually come, but it is very exciting to have the book signed by its author. Personally, I really like to read before bed. Normally it helps me to relax and to fall asleep.
Hola Alex. "Do" es más hacer una acción. "Make" es como fabricar. No hace falta "The time" - se entiende. Sigue practicando.
2024年3月5日
One of my favorite genres is fantasy. It promotes imagination and it makes me feel very good when the stories come alive within me. I also read novels and thrillers. Book clubs exist for sharing opinions and passion for books. At book fairs, an author will typically deliver a presentation about a book and then sign copies. After you buy one, the wait to have it signed is exhausting because so many people are eager for the author's signature. I prefer bedtime for reading. It helps me relax and fall asleep
2024年3月6日
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