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Hello, I'm Annie, 27 years old. I live in the Philippines, Manila. I'm doing marketing and investing in the APP of an AI company. If you are interested in doing this, contact me on Telegram. I will explain everything to you. The salary will vary based on how much investment you can make. This is my telegram user name - @annieante77
2023年8月9日 11:48
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Hello, I'm Annie, and I'm 27 years old. I live in Manila, in the Philippines. I'm doing marketing and investing in the APP of an AI company. If you are interested in doing this, contact me on Telegram. I will explain everything to you. The salary will vary based on how much investment you can make. This is my telegram user name - @annieante77
Hello! Thank you for showing this text to me and allowing me to suggest some corrections. It's already very good, but I changed two parts in the first two sentences to create a more natural English flow. Otherwise, your writing is correct, and the meaning is clear. You could change some of your word order, though, if you wanted some variation. For example, your second-last sentence could be changed to "The salary will vary based on how much you can invest." Thank you, again. If I can help some more, please send me another message or book a lesson with me. Have a great day!
2023年8月9日
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