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Mae
My best friend and I met when we were high school students. Through a concert band, we got to know each other. We played the same instruments and were always together. As the years went by, we started to advise and help each other. She always makes an effort and has her own opinion and influences me in a good way. Also, she says I do too. Therefore, she is my best friend, not to mention like a sister to me.
2021年7月28日 15:05
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My best friend and I met when we were high school students. We both played in a concert band and this is how we got to know each other. We played the same instruments and were always together. As the years went by, we started to advise and help each other. She has always makes an effort in our friendship. She has her own opinion and is a positive influence in my life. She says that I am also a positive influence in her life! Therefore, she is my best friend, and we are so close she is like a sister to me.
Very nice Mae! most of your sentences were grammatically correct. I just gave you some suggestions to improve clarity and flow.
2021年7月28日
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