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Today, I want to talk about how important music in my life is.
Music is the most important thing except for my family and friends for me. I have some reasons why I think so.
First of all, I can listen to various music gernes according to my mood. For example, the one thing is that I listen to ballads when I am sad and tired, and the other thing is that I listen to music with a good beat when I am happy and enjoyable. Therefore, I think that music stays considerate of my feelings. For instance, I listened to the song with the lyrics that suited my situation at that time cheered me up when I was having a hard time and didn’t feel like doing anything.
Secondly, it helps me when I communicate with other people. I think there are many people whose hobby is listening to music. If the music I and a person like is same, we can talk together enjoyably and make friends. Therefore, I think music connects people across borders. For example, I have a foreigner who likes the same music, talks to each together, and has become friends. It’s precious and happy things for me.
For these reasons, music is very important in my life.
2023年11月20日 22:33
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Today, I want to talk about how important music in my life is. Music is the most
important thing except for my family and friends for me. I have some reasons why
I think so. First of all, I can listen to various music genres according to my
mood. For example, the one thing is that I listen to ballads when I am sad and
tired, and the other thing is that I listen to music with a good beat when I am
happy and enjoyable. Therefore, I think that music stays considerate of my
feelings. For instance, I listened to a song with lyrics that suited my
situation at that time and cheered me up when I was having a hard time and didn’t
feel like doing anything. Secondly, it helps me when I communicate with other
people. I think there are many people whose hobby is listening to music. If the
music I and a person like is the same, we can talk together enjoyably and make
friends. Therefore, I think music connects people across borders. For example, I
have a foreigner who likes the same music, talk to each together, and have
become friends. It’s a precious and happy thing for me. For these reasons, music
is very important in my life.
2023年11月21日
Today, I want to talk about how important music is in my life.
Music is the most important thing for me, except for my family and friends. I have some reasons why I feel this way.
First of all, I can listen to various music genres according to my mood. For example, I listen to ballads when I am sad and tired, and music with a good beat when I am happy and enjoying life. Therefore, I think that music reflects my feelings. For instance, I listened to a song with the lyrics that suited my situation at that time. This cheered me up when I was having a hard time and didn’t feel like doing anything.
Secondly, it helps me when I communicate with other people. I think there are many people whose hobby is listening to music. If the music I and a person like is same, we can talk together enjoyably and make friends. Therefore, I think music connects people across borders. For example, I know a foreigner who likes the same music. We talk to each other, and have become friends. It’s a precious and happy thing for me.
For these reasons, music is very important in my life.
2nd sentence: If you put FOR ME at the end it is part of the list coming after EXCEPT FOR., so move it earlier in the sentence. The 'the thing is' construction doesn't really add any information and just clutters the sentences. If you are ENJOYABLE it means that other enjoy being with you. That's cool that you like music so much! I'm a musician myself.
2023年11月21日
Today, I want to talk about how important music is in my life is.
Music is the most important thing away from my family and friends for me. I have some reasons why I say so.
First of all, I can listen to various music genres depending on my mood. For example, the one thing is that I listen to ballads when I am sad and tired, and the other thing is that I listen to music with a good beat when I am happy and excited. Therefore, I think that music stays considerate of my feelings. For instance, I listened to a song with lyrics that suited my situation at that time cheered me up when I was having a hard time and didn’t feel like doing anything.
Secondly, it helps me when I communicate with other people. I think there are many people whose hobby is listening to music. If the music I and a person like is same, we can talk together enjoyably and make friends. Therefore, I think music connects people across borders. For example, I have a foreigner who likes the same music as me, we talk to each other, and have become friends. It’s precious and happy things for me.
For these reasons, music is very important in my life.
2023年11月21日
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