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Today is a nice day, it's no rain, no hot feeling. I've been spending my all day at college to study by myself. Now, i'm being a coffee shop inside my college, having positive vibe here.
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Today is a nice day, it's not raining, nor is it too hot. I've been spending my day
at college studying by myself. Now, I'm at a coffee shop by my college,having a positive vibe.
Hey there, I changed your paragraph a little. I understood what you were trying to say. I am glad that you are having a good day and I hope to hear more of your good days sometime soon. Keep writing.
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Today is a nice day because it's not raining and not too hot. I've been spending my day
at school studying by myself. Now I’m at a coffee shop inside my college which has a
positive vibe.
2020年11月12日
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Today is a nice day, it's no rain, no hot feeling. I've been spending my all day
at college to study by myself. Now, i'm being a coffee shop inside my college,
having positive vibe here.
This is how I would more so say this.
2020年11月12日
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Today is a nice day, it's not raining or feeling hot. I've been spending all my day
at college studying by myself. Now, i'm at coffee shop inside my college,
having positive vibe here.
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