Roy
I woke up late today,so I couldn’t catch my usual train. The first class was a little difficult for me but after second class, I ate the lunchbox my mom made. It was delicious and gave me energy.
2025年4月18日 05:24
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Nice story! Just a couple of small tips — “after the second class” sounds more natural, and “the lunch my mom made” flows better than “the lunchbox.” Great job overall!
2025年4月24日 14:01