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Noemí Villagómez
Hi everyone, could somebody help me if the next paragraph is it correct? Thanks in advance.
*Professional profile*
Organized, responsable and analytical with more than nine years of experience in project coordination. Highly motivated in self-learning, with desire to being part of a strategic company to developing and implementing actions that help its growth and success.
2020年11月7日 15:44
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I would just change it a little bit:
*Professional profile*
Organized, responsable and analytical with more than nine years of experience in project coordination. Highly motivated self-learner, with a desire to be part of a strategic company to develop and implement actions that help its growth and success.
I might also change the last bit to “help it grow and succeed”, but it works how it is too 🙂
2020年11月7日
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