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Today, I came to Round One after college. At Round One, I played medal games, darts, and pool. When I got home, I had mala soup for dinner. Tomorrow, I have to go to college for make-up classes. I have English and biology classes tomorrow. I have a biology test next week, so I need to study a lot. I also have a part-time job tomorrow, so it’s going to be a really busy day.
2026年7月22日 10:45
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Today, I went to Round One after college. At Round One, I played medal games, darts, and pool. When I got home, I had mala soup for dinner. Tomorrow, I have to go to college for make-up classes. I have English and biology classes tomorrow. I have a biology test next week, so I need to study a lot. I also have a part-time job tomorrow, so it’s going to be a really busy day.
Level: C1.
Your writing is clear, organised, and natural. You explain your day and your plans for tomorrow smoothly, and your grammar is accurate. The only correction was a small vocabulary choice (“went” instead of “came”). Excellent work! 😊
2026年7月22日 14:30
Today, I went to Round One of a competition after classes. At Round One, I played medal games, darts, and pool. When I got home, I had mala soup for dinner. Tomorrow, I have to go to college for make-up classes. In fact, I have English and biology classes tomorrow. Furthermore, I have a biology test next week, so I need to study a lot. I also have a part-time job tomorrow, so it’s going to be a really busy day.
This was really good. You were able to explain your day in detail with some good logical progression. The corrections were mainly to help you link your ideas together more smoothly. Keep up the great effort!
2026年7月22日 22:38
Today, I went to Round One after college. At Round One, I played medal games,
darts, and pool. When I got home, I had mala soup for dinner. Tomorrow, I have
to go to college for make-up classes. I have English and biology classes ( implied )I have a biology test next week, so I need to study a lot. I also have work tomorrow, so it’s going to be a really busy day.
Good work. Makes it sound a bit more natural. Even if it’s a part time job it’s just work. You could also I also have to work my part time job tomorrow
2026年7月22日 11:16
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