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wendy
Whether you believe it or not, visiting a strange place always makes us feel both peaceful and excited. All the things we experiece in a strange place easily help us forget the annoying things happened at hometown. Each time, when I get off the train while travelling, the first thing I do is to take a deep breath, the relaxing feeling suddenly goes through my body, then an amazing advanture begins. After arriving at the hotel I have booked online before, I definitely have a place for resting in the next few days. The left things are to walk around the city ,enjoy its culture and food. I feel really relaxed which is very different the situation at my work place.After doing plenty of fun things, I have to get back home with mixed feelings. Though travelling can give us a short time of relaxing, we eventually have to go back reality. Planning next trip has slowly become one of the most important parts of my life!
2024年8月21日 08:29
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Whether you believe it or not, visiting a strange place always makes us feel both peaceful and excited. All the things we experience in a strange place easily help us forget the annoying things that happened in our hometown. Each time, when I get off the train while traveling, the first thing I do is take a deep breath. The relaxing feeling suddenly goes through my body, and then an amazing adventure begins. After arriving at the hotel I booked online before, I definitely have a place for resting in the next few days. The remaining things are to walk around the city and enjoy its culture and food. I feel really relaxed, which is very different from the situation at my workplace. After doing plenty of fun things, I have to get back home with mixed feelings. Though traveling can give us a short time to relax, we eventually have to go back to reality. Planning the next trip has slowly become one of the most important parts of my life!
Your description of traveling is vivid and engaging. You have effectively conveyed the excitement and peace that comes with visiting new places. To improve, ensure you use the correct form of words like experience and adventure and clarify sentences for better readability. Keep up the great work!
2024年8月22日
Whether you believe it or not, visiting a strange place always makes us feel
both peaceful and excited. All the things we experience in a strange place easily
help us forget the annoying things that happened in our hometown. Each time when I get
off the train while travelling, the first thing I do is to take a deep breath,
the relaxing feeling suddenly goes through my body, then an amazing adventure
begins. After arriving at the hotel I previously booked online, I definitely
have a place to rest in for the next few days. What is left is to walk
around the city ,enjoy its culture and food. I feel really relaxed, which is very
different from the situation at my workplace. After doing plenty of fun things, I
have to get back home with mixed feelings. Though travelling can give us a short
time of relaxing, we eventually have to go back to reality. Planning the next trip has
slowly become one of the most important parts of my life!
2024年8月21日
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