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Yeah, I remember the first time I traveled alone. It wasn't a long journey by it had me thrilled and a bit nervous also, to be honest.
2024年9月10日 04:43
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Yeah, I remember the first time I traveled alone. It wasn't a long journey but it had me thrilled and a bit(somewhat) nervous at the same time, to be honest.
2024年9月10日
Yeah, I remember the first time I traveled alone. It wasn't a long journey but it had me thrilled and a bit nervous too, to be honest.
2024年9月10日
The mistake in the sentence is the use of "by" instead of "but". The word "but" is needed to introduce a contrast between the two clauses.
Corrected sentence:
"Yeah, I remember the first time I traveled alone. It wasn't a long journey, but it had me thrilled and a bit nervous also, to be honest."
Additional suggestions:
Other possible improvements: - You could replace "also" with "too" to make the sentence sound smoother:
"It wasn't a long journey, but it had me thrilled and a bit nervous too."
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2024年9月10日
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