Molly
Early morning, I checked on Italki first and I receipted many helps. It is much easier and it takes less time and less brainstorming to write some sentence like this than to study from corrections. I like Italki because of that!
2023年3月26日 23:16
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"Early in the morning, I checked Italki first and received a lot of help. It is much easier and takes less time and less brainstorming to write sentences like this than to study from corrections. I like Italki because of that!"
"Early in the morning" is a more common expression than "Early morning". "Checked Italki" is more accurate than "Checked on Italki". "Receipted" is not a commonly used verb in this context. "Received" is a more appropriate verb here. "Many helps" should be changed to "a lot of help". "Some sentence" should be changed to "sentences". "Less brainstorming" could be better phrased as "less mental effort". The exclamation mark at the end is appropriate in this context as it shows enthusiasm. Overall, the corrected version is clearer, more concise, and grammatically correct. Good job!
2023年3月26日
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