jean
By interacting with diverse people in college, I broadened my view of the world. I realized each of them can have such a different characteristic!
2023年3月27日 21:44
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By interacting with a diverse group of people in college, I broadened my view of the world. I realized that each of them have such unique characteristics!
You wrote diverse people, but you should have wrote a diverse group of people. This would mean everyone in the group was different from one another. :)
2023年3月27日
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