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In the ancient era, King Solomon had many wives who were from other countries.
One of their wives made him worship another god. Gradually, he drifted away from true God.
When he was elderly, he became proud and foolish. He made hard work for his subject.
2023年4月7日 11:48
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In the ancient era, King Solomon had many wives who were from other countries. One of his wives made him worship another god. Gradually, he drifted away from the true God. When he was elderly, he became proud and foolish, making hard work for his subjects.
"their" should be replaced with "his" since King Solomon is a singular male subject. "true God" should be capitalized as it refers to a specific deity in the Abrahamic religions. "subject" should be pluralized as it refers to the people governed by King Solomon.
2023年4月7日
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