Cristina Rubio
What kind of holiday do you like? I like to go on holiday to the beach. I like very much the sea, the sun… I usually go to Alicante and Valencia because I like the Mediterranean Sea. I like swimming in the sea, walking along the seashore, spending time in the shadow reading a book or talking with my family. I prefer to go to the beach because it relaxes me a lot and I feel very well so I think it’s a very good thing for my health.
2023年4月20日 10:23
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What kind of holiday do you like? I like to go on holiday to the beach. I like very much the sea, the sun… I usually go to Alicante and Valencia because I like the Mediterranean Sea. I like swimming in the sea, walking along the seashore, spending time in the shadow reading a book or talking with my family. I prefer to go to the beach because it relaxes me a lot and I feel very well so I think it’s a very good thing for my health. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ What do you like to do on your holidays? On my holidays, i like to go to the beach. The sea, the sun, i like them very much. Usually, I go to Alicante and Valencia because of the Mediterranean sea. I like swimming in the sea. Walking along the seashore, spending time under the shade while reading a book or talking to my family. But i much prefer going to the beach more because it helps me relax and i feel good. I think that going to the beach is a very good thing for my health.
Hello, Cristina! How are you? I feel the same way as you do regarding the beach, the sea and just swimming in general. I tried not to change your sentences too much and i did fix the grammar mistakes. My version might not be perfect but i do hope you learn something from it. Have a nice day!
2023年4月20日
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What kind of holiday do you like? I like to go on holiday to the beach. I like the sea very much and the sun. I usually go to Alicante and Valencia because I like the Mediterranean Sea. I like swimming in the sea, walking along the seashore, spending time in the shade reading a book or talking with my family. I prefer to go to the beach because it relaxes me a lot and I feel very well so I think it’s a very good thing for my health.
2023年4月20日
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