Giuseppe Mirabella
Hi, can someone tell me if this application letter is correct? Good morning, my name is Giuseppe Mirabella, and I'm writing to express my interest in working with your company. I'm eager to find a new role where I can contribute with my creative skills. I am interested in positions as a social media manager, copywriter and/or as an assistant graphic designer. To be honest, I'm contacting you because I have had too many disappointments with Italian marketing agencies, and to be even more honest, I think professionalism is lacking. I need to take a leap forward, to prove to myself and others that I am worth much more. As detailed in my CV, my professional and studies background is primarily rooted in communication. My recent tenure with XXXX agency afforded me the opportunity to service prominent clients. An experience that enhanced my learning but also bolstered my confidence in my professional capabilities. I appreciate your time and consideration and I look forward to the possibility of discussing how I can contribute to your team. Warm regards.
2024年5月8日 11:08
回答 · 1
Hi Giuseppe, I noticed a small grammatical issue that I thought I should point out in case you missed it. The sentence “An experience that enhanced my learning but also bolstered….” is not a complete sentence and cannot stand alone. It is a clause that should be attached to the prior sentence with a comma. Alternatively, you could add something like “This was an experience that enhanced my learning”, or “This experience enhanced my learning…”. Hope this helps!
2024年5月13日
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