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I cooked fried oysters (the Japanese name is “kakifurai”)at first. I've never cooked food because It's difficult
to control the heat and time when it's frying.
And I also make tar sauce.
I wonder if fried oysters (kakifurai) are a Japanese dish or not.
anyway, it was so delicious and I'm going to cook again.
2025年1月17日 12:09
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I cooked fried oysters (called "kakifurai" in Japanese) for the first time. I’ve never tried cooking fried food before because it’s difficult to control the heat and timing while frying. I also made tartar sauce to go with it.
I wonder if fried oysters (kakifurai) are considered a Japanese dish or not. Anyway, they were so delicious, and I’m definitely going to make them again!
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2025年1月17日
I made fried oysters (the Japanese name is “kakifurai”) at first. I've never cooked food because it's difficult to control the heat and length of time when it's frying.
And I also made tartar sauce.
I wonder if fried oysters (kakifurai) are a Japanese dish or not.
Anyway, it was so delicious and I'm going to cook again.
2025年1月17日
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