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Can you help me shorten the these sentences?
①Here is a photo of me and Autumn! I was happy too get the chance to hang out with her while I was in LA. I missed seeing you when I was in LA, but I am planning another trip to LA later this year and I would love to chat with you over a cup of coffee then, if you are available!
2022年4月8日 17:40
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Corrected:
Here is a photo of me and Autumn! I was happy to get the chance to hang out with her while I was in LA. I missed seeing you while I was there, but I am planning another trip to LA later this year. I would love to chat with you over a cup of coffee then if you are available!
Shortened:
Here is a photo of me and Autumn! I was happy to hang out with her while I was in LA but I missed seeing you! I'm planning another trip there later this year and would love to get a cup of coffee with you then if you're available
There's no way to make it much shorter without losing your intentions!
2022年4月9日
Hi,
Try this.
①Here is a photo of me and Autumn! I was happy to get the chance to hang out with her while I was in LA. I missed seeing her when I was in LA. But I am planning another trip to LA later this year. I would love to chat with her over a cup of coffee then if she is available!
At the end of line one, you wrote her. So, I changed all of the "you" to her.
Cheers
2022年4月8日
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