Adejoke Azeez
Today, after i woke up, i pray ,eat and wash my dishes afterwards i went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while after waking up and shower and took a short trip to my elder sister place cause we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow.
2022年5月24日 22:14
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受邀老师
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✓ woke up pray → prayed eat → ate wash → washed after waking up and shower → ... and showerING my elder sister place → my elder sister'S place we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow → we... HAVE a plan to go to the market tomorrow If you say you "had" a plan, I understand that you no longer have this plan. It would be best to break this post up into at least three different sentences using punctuation.
2022年5月25日
Today, after I woke up, prayed, ate and washed my dishes, I went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while. After waking up, I took a shower and visited my elder sister because we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow.
2022年5月25日
受邀老师
Today, after I woke up, I prayed, ate and washed my dishes. Afterwards I went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while. After waking up and showering I took a short trip to my older sister's place, because we plan to go the market together tomorrow.
Here is another try to do it in the way which italki expects.
2022年5月25日
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