Hello everyone I am sunny living in Thailand. There are three people in my family; mom, older sister and I. I am hardly happy to be with them because I am as the main one to manage money. I was not ab

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Hello everyone I am sunny living in Thailand. There are three people in my family; mom, older sister and I. I am hardly happy to be with them because I am as the main one to manage money. I was not able to be what I want. I am too bored. They like to oder me to do such as telling me to choose a carer that I don’t want to be but I could not deny. They just told me it’s the best but No any asking my opinion!! Lastly I promise myself if I have children or not, I will not control them to do what they don’t like.

2021年3月4日 08:18

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Hello everyone, It is sunny in Thailand. There are three people in my family; mom, my older sister and me. I am not very happy to be with them because I am the main one who manages money. I was not able to be what I wanted. I am very bored. They like to order me to do things such as telling me to choose a career that I don’t want to be but I wasn't able to deny. They just told me it’s the best option without even asking my opinion!! Lastly I promise myself if I have children or not, I will not control them to do what they don’t like.

For the first sentence, 'I am sunny' can mean that you are happy to live in Thailand, but if you were talking about the weather, you use 'it' as you are referring to the weather, not to you. There are a few spelling mistakes and word choice errors but otherwise, pretty good! 👍

2021年3月5日