I live in Brazil, South Hemiphere. Today the weather was sunny and hot. There were just a few clouds in the sky, and the temperature was something around 30°C (86°F). The night, instead, is quite wind

Daniel Áquila

I live in Brazil, South Hemiphere. Today the weather was sunny and hot. There were just a few clouds in the sky, and the temperature was something around 30°C (86°F). The night, instead, is quite windy and fresh.

2021年3月7日 00:53

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I live in Brazil, in the Southern Hemisphere. Today the weather was sunny and hot. There were just a few clouds in the sky, and the temperature was something around 30°C (86°F). The night, instead, is quite windy and fresh.

Excellent! The last sentence would sound more natural by replacing "instead" with "on the other hand"

2021年3月7日

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