Anna
In April, when Easter was, my mum with my younger sister made unusual paper eggs. On the one side there were patterns, on the other side there were animals' youngs. And my mum drew a dinosaur! You can see it on the picture. It was so cute that I asked her to draw the same on my shirt. So I'm still waiting for my fine shirt...
2020年8月9日 17:50
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In April, when it was Easter, my mum and my little sister made unusual Easter eggs. On the one side there were patterns, on the other side there were animal babies. And my mum drew a dinosaur! You can see it in the picture. It was so
cute that I asked her to draw the same picture on my shirt. So I'm still waiting for my shirt...
Really good job! Just some minor mistakes that will get better as you learn the more common ways of writing in English.
2020年8月9日
In April, over Easter, my mum and my younger sister made unusual paper
eggs. On the one side there were patterns, on the other side there were animal
young. And my mum drew a dinosaur! You can see it in the picture. It was so
cute that I asked her to draw the same on my shirt. So I'm still waiting for my
fine shirt...
Nicely done, Anna! The text was great and very easy to read. The idea of making paper eggs and adorning them with pictures is also very cool. I might have to try it myself.
2020年8月10日
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Anna
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英语, 法语, 希伯来语, 俄语
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