Giancarlo
I reckon it’s a good thing, it’s never too late to learn something new, in fact I strongly believe that is better, better because in that period of the life that person know what he/she wants and what makes him/her happy, that person is going to study with passion in order to get that knowledge.
2021年5月15日 19:46
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I reckon it’s a good thing, it’s never too late to learn something new, in fact I strongly believe that is better, better because in that period of the life that person know what he/she wants and what makes him/her happy, that person is going to study with passion in order to get that knowledge.
Totally agree with you on the subject. As for the text here's a suggestion - you could also use 'they/them instead of 'he/she' and 'him/her'
2021年5月15日
I reckon it’s a good thing as it’s never too late to learn something new. in fact, I strongly believe that it is better because in that period of the life A more mature person knows what he/she wants and what makes him/her happy and that person is going to study with passion in order to get that knowledge.
If you are writing an essay, you should use shorter sentences, and separate them with periods. You can use conjunctions to join two different phrases rather than commas.
2021年5月15日
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