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职业教师Could you please correct my essay? Thank you in advance🙃.
Running is one of effective ways to improve sleep quality. But the correct running time is in the morning when the sun rises ,not afternoon or evening.This is not a theroy but my experience.
In the Chinese traditional medical science we think human is just a part of the nature, so we need to follow the regular rules of the nature, for example go to bed when the sun sets and get up when the sun rises, like other animals in the nature. so that we could get good-quality sleep.
2024年6月18日 22:05
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Could you please correct my essay? Thank you in advance🙃.
Running is an effective way to improve sleep quality. But the best time is in the morning when the sun rises, not afternoon or evening. This is not a theory, but my experience.
In Chinese traditional medical science we think human beings are a part of nature, so we need to follow the rules of nature, for example, go to bed when the sun sets, and get up when the sun rises, like other animals, so that we sleep well.
Perhaps that works near the equator, where seasonal differences in daylight hours are smaller, but it wouldn't work at northern [or far southern latitudes] where you could get 14 or more hours sleep in winter, and 8 or fewer hours in summer.
2024年6月19日
Could you please correct my essay? Thank you in advance🙃. Running is one of the
effective ways to improve sleep quality. But the correct running time is in the
morning when the sun rises , not in the afternoon or evening.This is not a theory, but my
experience. In Chinese traditional medicine, we think that human beings are just a
part of nature, so we need to follow natural law. For
example, 'Go to bed when the sun sets and get up when the sun rises', like other
animals in nature. This will result in good-quality sleep.
How interesting!!!
2024年6月19日
Could you please correct my essay? Thank you in advance🙃. Running is one of the
effective ways to improve sleep quality. But the correct running time is in the
morning when the sun rises, not in the afternoon or evening.This is not a theory but from my
experience. In the Chinese traditional medical science, we think being human is just being a
part of nature so we need to follow the regular rules of nature. For
example, go to bed when the sun sets and get up when the sun rises like other
animals in nature. This is so we could get good-quality sleep.
2024年6月18日
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