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Hi there! Today I had to wake up 6 a.m, but I woke up at 7 a.m. I had to do a lot of assignments yesterday, but I couldn’t because I was tired. Today I will go to korean restaurant where I working with my friend. I’m hungry now, so I want to eat gyoza and chijimi. I like Korean food, so I’m looking forward to go to Korean restaurant.
2023年6月19日 07:30
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Hi there! Today, I had to wake up at 6 a.m., but I ended up waking up at 7 a.m. Yesterday, I had a lot of assignments to do, but I couldn't complete them because I was tired. Today, I will be going to the Korean restaurant where I work with my friend. I'm feeling hungry right now, and I'm really craving gyoza and chijimi. Since I enjoy Korean food, I'm eagerly looking forward to going to the Korean restaurant. Remarks: The capitalization of "Korean" should be consistent throughout the text. The punctuation marks at the end of sentences should have a space before them. It's preferable to use "ended up" instead of "couldn't" to indicate that you woke up later than intended. The word "working" should be replaced with "work" to maintain consistency in verb tense. "Gyoza" and "chijimi" should be written in lowercase unless they are proper nouns. It's better to mention the specific name of the Korean restaurant for clarity and specificity.
2023年6月19日
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