Saeed
I used to fight with my oldest brother. I don't like to talk so much about it since I was not able to win the fights. As I said, my brother is older and at that time he was stronger than me. I have used glasses since my early age, and I remember that my glasses were always broken during the fights. Beside these fights during our childhood, I have only two brothers and I love them so much.
2022年1月5日 04:00
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I used to fight with my oldest brother. I don't like to talk about it much since I was not able to win the fights. But, as I said, my brother is older and at that time he was stronger than me. I have used glasses from an early age, and I remember that my glasses were always broken during the fights. In spite of these fights during our childhood, I love my brothers so much, as I only have two of them.
Nice writing! I just made a few changes. Please note that instead of "from an early age" you can also use "since I was young". I also was a bit confused when reading your last sentence. So look at that one. I hope you can spend more time with your brothers. They are awesome.
2022年1月5日
受邀老师
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I used to fight with my oldest brother. I don't like to talk so much about it since I was not able to win the fights. As I said, my brother was older and also stronger than I. I have used glasses since an early age, and I remember that my glasses would always get broken during the fights. Besides these fights during our childhood, I have had no problems with my brothers and love them very much.
2022年1月6日
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