@rps.sky
Transcriptions from videos - I
1. "This is just one of the reasons why studies are now showing the more of these short Tiktok style videos you watch, the more depressed you become."
2. "Being famous used to require having actual talents, but now as a result of Tiktok, the measure of fame for teens is directly proportionate with the volume of tasteless debauchery the algorithm promotes."
3. "Because Tiktok is not depressing and creepy, it is neurological damaging. Never before have we seen attention spans drop so low."
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2022年6月24日 02:37
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The student's original text follows. (My comments on pronunciation are below): Transcriptions from videos - I
1. "This is just one of the reasons why studies are now showing the more of these short Tiktok style videos you watch, the more depressed you become."
2. "Being famous used to require having actual talents, but now as a result of Tiktok, the measure of fame for teens is directly proportionate with the volume of tasteless debauchery the algorithm promotes."
3. "Because Tiktok is not depressing and creepy, it is neurological damaging. Never before have we seen attention spans drop so low."
As far as I can tell, your transcription looks good. As far as your reading, while there is room for improvement, your pronunciation is actually very good, and doesn’t sound Brazilian. I’ll just mention a few things: “Proportionate” as an adjective should *not* have a secondary accent on the last syllable. Only a verb would have that secondary accent. “Debauchery”: The “ch” should be pronounced as in French / Portuguese, as that word is a recent borrowing from French. “Neurologically damaging” — we use the adverb-forming suffix “-ly”. Note that the “a” after the “c” is usually silent. “Because” — Is that really the word used? All in all, a pretty good job. Keep it up, and as you get more comfortable and relax more you’ll sound even better.
2022年6月24日
Very much agree with the previous comment, except that I would say "debauchery" is correct, with a "hard" CH sound. Overall, your speech sounds very good, just a little too careful.
Transcriptions from videos - I
1. "This is just one of the reasons why studies are now showing the more of these short Tiktok style videos you watch, the more depressed you become."
2. "Being famous used to require having actual talents, but now as a result of Tiktok, the measure of fame for teens is directly proportionate with the volume of tasteless debauchery the algorithm promotes."
3. "Because Tiktok is not depressing and creepy, it is neurological damaging. Never before have we seen attention spans drop so low."
2022年7月10日
Transcriptions from videos - I
1. "Studies are now showing that the more short, Tiktok style videos you watch, the more depressed you become."
2. "Being famous used to require having actual talent, but now as a result of Tiktok, the measure of fame for teens is directly proportional to the volume of tasteless debauchery they perform and the algorithm promotes."
3. "Because Tiktok has a depressive effect, it is neurologically damaging. In addition, average attention spans for teens have dropped to their lowest point."
2022年12月16日
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