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Nowadays, returning from a trip and planning a new trip is an important part in our daily life. Trips always bring us relaxation and joy, but meanwhile cost a lot of money. So,in order to travel regularly, we need to save enough money for it. The first thing that we should know is that what place we will get to. Long distance usually means extra budget for transportation. In that case, if we have a tight budget, we need to reduce the money we spend on other things, such as food and hotels. On the other side, if you are on a short distance trip, you can have a loose budget on food and other things. When you have saved enough money for youe trip, everything goes easily. You just need to pack your own stuff. Don't forget the most useful tip that rolling your clothes instead of folding them. That canhelp save room for other essential things, such as medicine. The last thing you need to do is to turn off the aieconditions in your room. I havre seen some people happily returened from their trip, but found that the aircondition has been working for many days.
2025年9月2日 09:07
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Nowadays, returning from a trip and planning a new one is an important part of daily life. Trips always bring us relaxation and joy, but at the same time they cost a lot of money. So, in order to travel regularly, we need to save enough money.
The first thing we should decide is what place we want to visit. Long distances usually mean extra costs for transportation. In that case, if we have a tight budget, we need to spend less on other things, such as food and hotels. On the other hand, if it is a short trip, you can spend more freely on food and other things.
When you have saved enough money for your trip, everything goes more smoothly. You just need to pack your things. Don’t forget the most useful tip: roll your clothes instead of folding them. That can help save room for other essential items, such as medicine.
The last thing you need to do is turn off the air conditioning in your room. I have seen some people happily return from their trip, only to find that the air conditioning has been running for many days.
“an important part in our daily life” → “an important part of daily life” (we use of here). “but meanwhile cost a lot of money” → “but at the same time they cost a lot of money” (sounds smoother). “the first thing that we should know is that what place we will get to” → “the first thing we should decide is what place we want to visit” (clearer and more natural). “on the other side” → “on the other hand” (the usual phrase). “loose budget” → “spend more freely” (sounds more natural). Small spelling fixes: youe → your, havre → have, returened → returned, aieconditions/aircondition → air conditioning. Your original ideas are clear and well organized—these small changes just make the text sound more natural.
2025年9月4日 04:13
Nowadays, returning from a trip and planning a new trip is an important part in
our daily life. Trips always bring us relaxation and joy, but meanwhile cost a
lot of money. So,in order to travel regularly, we need to save enough money for
it. The first thing that we should know is that what place we will get to. Long
distance usually means extra budget for transportation. In that case, if we have
a tight budget, we need to reduce the money we spend on other things, such as
food and hotels. On the other side, if you are on a short distance trip, you can
have a loose budget on food and other things. When you have saved enough money
for youe trip, everything goes easily. You just need to pack your own stuff.
Don't forget the most useful tip that rolling your clothes instead of folding
them. That canhelp save room for other essential things, such as medicine. The
last thing you need to do is to turn off the aieconditions in your room. I havre
seen some people happily returened from their trip, but found that the
aircondition has been working for many days.
2025年9月2日 15:00
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