Kodai（まつした こうだい）
Which do you prefer living urban side or rural side?
A decision where you live is a big element of your life.
In my opinion, living rural is good.
First of all, rural side has nature. The nature makes us relax and refreshed.
Next, rural area often has lower cost of living compare with urban area. So we don’t have to spend money a lot if we live in rural side.
Finally, I think that people from rural are tend to kind. So we can live more easily in rural side.
As I stated, living rural side is more comfortable to spend your life.
2022年9月28日 09:51
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Which do you prefer? Living in the city or in the rural areas? The decision about where to live
is a big issue. In my opinion, living in the countryside is good. First of
all, nature is abundant, making us relax and feel refreshed. Next, rural
areas often have a lower cost of living compared to urban areas. So, we wouldn't have to
spend a lot of money. Finally, I think that people from
rural areas are kinder. So, we can live more comfortably.
Good try. Work hard and you'll get there.
You're recommending living rurally. You don't, therefore, need to mention it all the time. Also, you must use a variety of words to describe the same thing. English doesn't like repetition of words.
2022年9月28日
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