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We have all finally made it to the month of June, a beautiful summer time. This reminds me that my daughter's birthday is on the way. Every year, I need to plan her brithday ceremony ahead of time. I need to do something really different from the former years. Eating out or cooking food at home is the first thing comes into my mind, I usually make my decision by her advice. After deciding on the place where to celebrate, then what kind of party we will hold is another big problem for me, just a party for kids without adults, or to invite our relatives to have a reunion usually makes me crazy. because a child is capricious. So, I often make the decidion instead of her. Finally, ordering a fancy cake in a bakery and picking a gift is the easiest thing to do. As for adults around me, a bunch of flowers is enough on their birthday, they focus on who really care about them , some of them even won't deliberately tell others their birthday date. birthday is not that important for adults. after all, they are a lot of festivals need us to celebrate, it's really tired to prepare all the needs. We just celebrate these festival important for us including children's birthdays.
2023年6月7日 03:35
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We have all finally made it to the month of June, a beautiful time of summer. This reminds me that my daughter's birthday is on the way. Every year, I need to plan her birthday ceremony ahead of time. I need to do something really different each year. Eating out or cooking food at home is the first thing comes into my mind, I usually make my decision according to her wish. After deciding where to celebrate, the kind of party to hold is another big issue for me. Should it be a party just for kids, or a reunion which includes our relatives. The choice makes me crazy. because a child is capricious. So, I often make the decision for her. Finally, ordering a fancy cake from a bakery and picking a gift is the easiest chore. As for the adults in my life, a bunch of flowers is enough on their birthday. Their focus is on who really cares about them. Some of them deliberately won't even tell others their birthday. Birthdays are not that important to adults. After all, there are so many festivals we need to celebrate. It's really tiring to prepare all the needs. We just celebrate the important ones, especially children's birthdays.
"summer time" is not wrong but I changed it because it sounds too much like "summertime".
"is the first thing" is correct. If you want to use plural, say "eating out AND cooking ... ARE ..."
I do not understand the meaning of
"It usually makes me crazy. because a child is capricious."
I don't understand
"It's really tiring to prepare all the needs"
2023年6月7日
We have all finally made it to the month of June, a beautiful summer time. This reminds me that my daughter's birthday is on the way. Every year, I need to plan her birthday’s ceremony ahead of time. I need to do something really different from former years. Eating out or cooking food at home are the first things that come to my mind, I usually make my decision based on what she prefers. After deciding on where to celebrate, then I’ll still be stuck with choosing the kind of party to be held. Should it be just a party for kids without adults, or should I invite our relatives to have a family reunion? Such dilemma usually drives me crazy because a child is capricious, so I often make the decision for her. Finally, ordering a fancy cake in a bakery and picking a gift are the easiest things to do. As for other adults around me, offering them a bunch of flowers on their birthday is enough, they focus more on who really cares about them, some of them even refuse to give their birthday date. Birthdays are not that important for adults. After all, they are a lot of festivals to celebrate and it’s really exhausting to prepare for all of them. We just celebrate the festivals that are important for us and that includes our children's birthdays.
2023年6月7日
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