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Where do you want to go in Japan?
Where do you want to go in Japan?
I've been to Tokyo,Yokohama,Osaka,Kyoto.
I went to Tokyo and Yokohama last year.
The exhibition of the Alice in Wonderland was held there.
There were many works.
I really enjoyed it.
I went to Osaka and Kyoto 2 years ago.
I saw Yoshimoto Shinkigeki.
My friend lived in Gifu,and we met in Kyoto.
We ate Matcha parfait in Gion.
I had a great time.
I've never been to Sendai,Iwant to go there.
How about you?
2020年2月18日 08:59
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2020年2月18日
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Where do you want to go in Japan?
Where do you want to go in Japan?
I've been to Tokyo, Yokohama, Osaka and Kyoto.
I went to Tokyo and Yokohama last year.
The exhibition of <s>the</s> Alice in Wonderland was held there.
There were many works.
I really enjoyed it.
I went to Osaka and Kyoto two years ago.
I saw Yoshimoto Shinkigeki.
My friend lived in Gifu and we met in Kyoto.
We ate Matcha Parfait in Gion.
I had a great time.
I've never been to Sendai, I want to go there.
How about you?
Note: Well written, fluid and grammatically sound. I would only advise that you watch your spacing between words.
2020年2月18日
1
Where do you want to go in Japan?
Where do you want to go in Japan?
I've been to Tokyo, Yokohama, Osaka, Kyoto. (watch out for spaces after a comma)
I went to Tokyo and Yokohama last year.
The exhibition of <s>the</s> Alice in Wonderland was held there.
There were many <s>works</s> exhibits.
I really enjoyed it.
I went to Osaka and Kyoto 2 years ago.
I saw Yoshimoto Shinkigeki.
My friend lived (the past tense suggests, that he does not live there anymore) in Gifu, and we met in Kyoto.
We ate Matcha parfait in Gion.
I had a great time.
I've never been to Sendai, I want to go there.
How about you?
2020年2月18日
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