introduce myself

Helloeveryone! This is my first time coming herebecause I want to learn English well, but my level is low. I hope someone can help me. Now let me briefly introduce myself, My name is Xiehanwei. I'm 21 years old. My interests are drawing and reading, now add one more -studying English. I'm very lively and cheerful and like making friends. I hope in this website I can become friends with you.
If foreign friends want to know about China or learn Chinese, maybe I can help you. We can learn and make progress with each other. Thank you everyone!

The first word in every sentence and words in proper nouns start with a capital letter.

Put the punctuation right after the word, then leave a space.

Welcome to italki.

Introducing Myself

Hello<delete space>,<space should be here>everyone! This is my first time to come here. because I want to learn English (or I want to speak English well), but my level is low. (But I'm not so good yet.) I hope someone can help me.

Now let me briefly introduce myself, my name is xiehanwei, 21 years old. My interests are drawing and reading. Now, I have a new one -- studying English. I'm very lively and cheerful, like make friend. Hope this website can with you become friend. will gain me a friend.

If you want to learn about China, or if you want to learn Chinese, maybe I can help you. We can learn and make progress together! Thank you everyone!

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First thing to note here is: capitalization. Always capitalize proper nouns, the pronoun I and the first word of a sentence.

Anyway, hi! I'm Jash. I'm from Philippines. :3 Feel free to ask me questions.