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My favourite colour

There're many different kinds of colour in the world, such as white, blue, orange, red, and so on. But my favourite colour is green. I think green is the most beautiful colour. Do you know why? Because green is the colour of life. Do you think so? As you know, most alive plants are green, like grass and trees. Green is good for our eyes, too. When your eyes are very tired, you will watch the green trees or green grass, they can help you to relax your eyes. And I think green is the nature colour, I love nature things. Ohm, to tell you the truth, I don't know why I am like green, only like it. Maybe it's the colour of the life or…… Can you tell me what your favourite colour is?

<em>Correction: </em>

<em>There are many different types of colours in the world, such as: White, Blue, Orange, Red and so on. My favourite colour is Green. I think it is the most beautiful colour. Do you know why? Green is the colour of life, don't you think so? </em>

<em>As you know, most living plants are green, like grass and trees. Green is good for our eyes, too. When your eyes are very tired, watching green trees or green grass will help relax your eyes. </em>

<em>I also think Green is nature's colour, I love things of nature. Oh, to tell you the truth, I don't really know why I like Green, I just like it. Maybe it's the colour or life, or...</em>

<em>Can you tell me what your favourite colour is? </em>

There're many different kinds of colour in the world, such as white, blue, orange, red, and so on.

<em>Correction: There are many different types of colours in the world, such as: White, Blue, Orange, Red and so on.</em>

<em>Notes: "There're" is not very common to use compared to, "There are" but it is still right ^^ Colours should have capitals as they are a name of something. </em>

But my favourite colour is green. I think green is the most beautiful colour. Do you know why? Because green is the colour of life. Do you think so?

<em>Correction: My favourite colour is Green. I think it is the most beautiful colour. Do you know why? Green is the colour of life, don't you think so?</em>

Green is good for our eyes, too.

Notes: You could also maybe say, "Green is also good for our eyes."

As you know, most alive plants are green, like grass and trees. 

<em>Correction: As you know, most living plants are green, like grass and trees.</em>

<em>Notes: Instead of using "alive" you could use "living"</em>

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When your eyes are very tired, you will watch the green trees or green grass, they can help you to relax your eyes. 

<em>Notes: Suggestion: "When your eyes are very tired, watching green trees or green grass will help relax your eyes."/"When your eyes are very tired, you can watch the green trees or green grass, it can relax your eyes."</em>

And I think green is the nature colour, I love nature things. 

<em>Correction: I also think Green is nature's colour, I love things of nature. </em>

<em>Notes: I think it's better to remove "And" </em>

Ohm, to tell you the truth, I don't know why I am like green, only like it. Maybe it's the colour of the life or…… Can you tell me what your favourite colour is?

<em>Correction: </em>

<em>Oh, to tell you the truth, I don't really know why I like Green, I just like it. Maybe it's the colour or life, or...</em>

<em>Can you tell me what your favourite colour is? </em>

<em>Notes: </em><em>I think it</em><em> is better not to start off with</em>

<em>And, Because, But</em>

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I like the colour Blue. Sky Blue is really nice! ^_^;